If I lived in a town or a city and when opening my front door I heard gunshots, I’d run for cover and immediately phone the police. But where I live I regularly open my front door and hear gunshots and think nothing of it. Those guns aren’t threatening me, but causing serious concern for the bunnies in the fields.
It’s important when you’re writing to decide which viewpoint you are writing from and to stick to it. As you can see, same scenario but different viewpoint and you have a totally different story.
Yes, makes for a wonderful 'twist in the tail' - sorry about that...hugs...xx
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